Reviews for My Stand
loversdream17 chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
Hey sorry i haven't reviewd in a while been very busy raising my two little monsters. who are enough at times to drive a sane person nutty but got to love them. Anyways i really like it and what it represents. Rythym is good but i got caught on the line that says:All my thoughts just lurk beneath its surface: i like the line but it kinds of holds it up because of how the otehr lines go. Sorry no offense menat all and all its a great piece. Great job.