hello pyro! awsome new chapter...err i believe it's an old one now n.n; lol sorry. well i loved it and i'm anticipating the next chatper! hee well i guess this is the one good thing of me being away. i don't have to wait long to find out what happens next.

girl? sam? hm. facinating. good chapter. raises a lot of questions.

I've really liked this story so far! Great job!

He's with Charlie!

Call me what you want, but yes! Sure, I like Zeke... Er, the other Zeke, but I think the whole time, subconsciously, I was rooting for Charlie. Will this last? I don't know. All I know is that I punched the air in frustration when I thought he was with Zeke, and did a little dance in my computer chair was I found out he was with Charlie. I guess I know what you want to call me now: crazy.

wow! that chapter was brilliant soz i really cant do reviews but that was the best bit in the story so far

o yet another angle to the mystery. good update.

wow. read the entire in thing in like 3 hours. good concept. luv the zekes. update soon.

Love it. Finally, Zeke admits his feelings. YAY!

Wait, now i have to wait for the next chapter. CURSE YOU!

Wait, no cursing! Bless you! Bless you and your awesome writing skills.

(PS: more please!)

~Niki Lemonade

Gotta love the confict... So Zeke finally admits to liking Zeke? That sounded weird. Nonetheless, this was a very informative chapter. I liked it a lot.

Excellent! I can review again! I love this story immensely, and I love reading your updates! But, I wouldn't mind if you posted longer chapters less often, so that you don't have to reformat it whenever u finish a chapter.

Anyway, I love the many twits, turns, and criss-crosses of all the plots in this story. Really well thought out. I can't wait to read the next section.

awsomes pyro, simply, amazingly, awsome! you really did a great chapter here, i'm soo happy for some reason! i mean, i want ZekeXzeke and well zeke just kinda tried to ruin it but still, i hope Zeke will conquer and get his way! once again, marvolous chapter, i hope you update soon!

i have to admit, i read this because the summary made me laugh. keep updating this :)

"...like flies toward a pulsating bug zapper. Toward death. Lucky bugs. We were here."

love it. :]

Stupid Zeke. Augh, so frustrating! Ah well, not much i can do about that...except create a voodoo doll of the Zekes and make them fall in love myself! Bwahahahahaha! My logic is infallible! Wait...they don't exist in my reality...dammit.

Sorry, fangirling on you. I've been hyper all day, my apologies. Again, wonderfully written. Engaging switches from past to present that keep me on my toes. And every time, you end with a cliffhanger that makes me impatient for the next installment.

Can't wait for more!

~Lemonade

oh man, another flipping cliffhanger...i should have seen it coming, i s'pose. Keep 'em coming, and write at whatever pace is best for your creative energy. That's the most important thing right?

Goodness, what'll happen...gah!