that part of the chapter was confusing. I thought that Charlie had tripped him, and that you were describing Charlie. Then i thought both were Jake, then i thought maybe you described Charlie and Jake had tripped him, or vice versa. As i said, confusing.

ARGH! you evil author type!

oh yes. ever so confused

good, I like getting somewhere... not like i've ever been anywhere

This is the best section you've written so far. There's real, raw, emotion here. Some of it's hard to understand if you haven't been there, (unfortunately I have), but even so, it's relateable.

I know I've been crappy about reviewing, but keep up the good work.

I love that he just opens his mouth and screams, that's pretty funny. Panic much? Wow, Sam is just rocking the boat huh? i bet she's enjoying it too. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

I have to say that this is one completely amazing story fuusho.

-Eck

This story is like a drug, I'm addicted. And now i wanna check out Frozen's stuff too, that line was beautiful.

OK, i'm excited to read the next chapter. I like these question games, they usually end up being catastrophic, and where would stories be with out catastrophies?

OK, i have no idea which Zeke is telling this chapter. I'm going to go back and figure out which one's dad's name is Kevin. Ah yes, it's from Original Zeke's POV. OK, interesting. Short chapter, not like that's a bad thing. The Zeke's definitely do have to figure something out though. It's pretty confusing. But i still am madly in love with this story.

Aw!

This was a great chapter. I really like both Zekes.

Anyway, please update soon.

Well, considering that it is almost 5 in the moring and I'm supposed to be finishing my homework, i think this is as far as I'm gonna get tonight. *sobs* oh, when did you start talking to us? (like, author's notes. Did i just completely miss earlier ones? maybe i should get some sleep...)Anyways, I'm not sure i understood the reason behind the different people's motives in this chapter, which means i have to keep reading to find out, which is awesome! I am completely and hopelessly in love with this story. The only way it could possibly be better was if it was about gay girls instead of gay guys. hahaha just kidding. XP.

whoa, is this chapter from the other Zeke's point of view? I like this voice, how it randomly discusses psychology. But with both voices, you have a certain style that is the same in both, which is cool. Oh, and Sam does sound hot! heheheh. OMG she was gonna get MARRIED! WHOA! ok, this story just went from really cool, to "i have to read more so i can figure out what's going on!" (in a good way, I'm interested in the pasts of your characters.

Oh man, i love the way you write a lot of action with out explanation, so that i want to read more so i can understand what just happened.

Wow. I have just fallen in love with this story. It must be tough to be the only out gay person at a high school. Makes me feel like maybe my life isn't so bad after all... hahaha, my life is actually pretty good right now, i was joking. but really, i love this story already. It's so well written. Your characters are very 3d, and your plots are dynamic. Congrats! I really like Sam, she seems pretty cool. I bet she's really hot too. :-P I love your description of his walk home. Especially the part about the park: "All the metal blushed with rust. The swings creaked in agony." I love that imagery. Great story!

awesome, but could you maybe give one of the zekes a nickname or something? It kinda makes things confusing.