Reviews for From Where We Stand
LEDlorien7 chapter 13 . 10/29/2006
that part of the chapter was confusing. I thought that Charlie had tripped him, and that you were describing Charlie. Then i thought both were Jake, then i thought maybe you described Charlie and Jake had tripped him, or vice versa. As i said, confusing.
LEDlorien7 chapter 10 . 10/29/2006
ARGH! you evil author type!
LEDlorien7 chapter 9 . 10/29/2006
oh yes. ever so confused
LEDlorien7 chapter 8 . 10/29/2006
good, I like getting somewhere... not like i've ever been anywhere
FrozenRose313 chapter 20 . 10/27/2006
This is the best section you've written so far. There's real, raw, emotion here. Some of it's hard to understand if you haven't been there, (unfortunately I have), but even so, it's relateable.

I know I've been crappy about reviewing, but keep up the good work.
LEDlorien7 chapter 7 . 10/26/2006
I love that he just opens his mouth and screams, that's pretty funny. Panic much? Wow, Sam is just rocking the boat huh? i bet she's enjoying it too. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
newsXflash chapter 19 . 10/25/2006
I have to say that this is one completely amazing story fuusho.

LEDlorien7 chapter 6 . 10/25/2006
This story is like a drug, I'm addicted. And now i wanna check out Frozen's stuff too, that line was beautiful.
LEDlorien7 chapter 5 . 10/25/2006
OK, i'm excited to read the next chapter. I like these question games, they usually end up being catastrophic, and where would stories be with out catastrophies?
LEDlorien7 chapter 4 . 10/25/2006
OK, i have no idea which Zeke is telling this chapter. I'm going to go back and figure out which one's dad's name is Kevin. Ah yes, it's from Original Zeke's POV. OK, interesting. Short chapter, not like that's a bad thing. The Zeke's definitely do have to figure something out though. It's pretty confusing. But i still am madly in love with this story.
vimaro22 chapter 19 . 10/25/2006

This was a great chapter. I really like both Zekes.

Anyway, please update soon.
LEDlorien7 chapter 3 . 10/25/2006
Well, considering that it is almost 5 in the moring and I'm supposed to be finishing my homework, i think this is as far as I'm gonna get tonight. *sobs* oh, when did you start talking to us? (like, author's notes. Did i just completely miss earlier ones? maybe i should get some sleep...)Anyways, I'm not sure i understood the reason behind the different people's motives in this chapter, which means i have to keep reading to find out, which is awesome! I am completely and hopelessly in love with this story. The only way it could possibly be better was if it was about gay girls instead of gay guys. hahaha just kidding. XP.
LEDlorien7 chapter 2 . 10/25/2006
whoa, is this chapter from the other Zeke's point of view? I like this voice, how it randomly discusses psychology. But with both voices, you have a certain style that is the same in both, which is cool. Oh, and Sam does sound hot! heheheh. OMG she was gonna get MARRIED! WHOA! ok, this story just went from really cool, to "i have to read more so i can figure out what's going on!" (in a good way, I'm interested in the pasts of your characters.

Oh man, i love the way you write a lot of action with out explanation, so that i want to read more so i can understand what just happened.
LEDlorien7 chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Wow. I have just fallen in love with this story. It must be tough to be the only out gay person at a high school. Makes me feel like maybe my life isn't so bad after all... hahaha, my life is actually pretty good right now, i was joking. but really, i love this story already. It's so well written. Your characters are very 3d, and your plots are dynamic. Congrats! I really like Sam, she seems pretty cool. I bet she's really hot too. :-P I love your description of his walk home. Especially the part about the park: "All the metal blushed with rust. The swings creaked in agony." I love that imagery. Great story!
ashes chapter 18 . 10/22/2006
awesome, but could you maybe give one of the zekes a nickname or something? It kinda makes things confusing.
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