hahaha lovely as always. you never leave me dissappointed.

the best part was definatly:

“Hey,” I said dreamily. No I didn’t. I turned around. I saw Zeke smiling stupidly at Anthony. The words never made it out of my mouth. How? When? Anthony looked just as surprised.

hehehehehe. awesome. if you have some spare time, i know my story is really long and hard to read. but you might like the last chapter (i've gotten pretty good reviews) and it's more of a monologue than anything else, so you don't have to know the plot to read it. it's not funny, it's actually quite serious... but i'd be interested in your thoughts, if you have a sec.

love always, keep updating!

oh wow. i loved that last bit. you're my hero...

i love that song. brilliant really. can't wait for an update

hehehehe i've decided i'm most like sam. (minus the whole... former engagement thing.)

i like this chapter, err part of a chapter, so keep em comin!

I'm so liking this.

why WHY must they be so short? You're an awesome writer though. You have great characters, they have realistic personality instead of cliche personalities. Yay for character people. Do you ever get the feeling that their personalities are beyond your controll?

ek! great chapter.

your shout out to me at the end pretty much made my more than shitty-ass-good-for-nothing-day. so thanks! i'm glad to hear you're attempting my story... i know it's a bit lengthy. i'm a wordy detail-y type person when it comes to writing i guess. (probably because i'm so indecisive in real life that i never can decide what to put in and what to leave out. but that's okay, i guess.)

and your "craziness" is quite awesome, just so ya know.

the first line is my favorite too. thanks for the compliment! XD

love always, and keep up the great work!

o0o i feel so special! you mentioned me! *shuddup, i know i'm a loser XD*

i like this chapter. very interesting... poor sam needs to be careful what she says though. zeke... erm wrigley... is pretty unobservant. i mean... sam just asked the other zeke (wow, this is confusing.. .how do you do it?) which GUY he thought was hottest... and then zeke w asked how long they'd been dating... i mean COME ON! *smacks zeke w* WAKE UP! HE'S GAY! lol

the whole bit with charlie is depressing. because sadly, i think about my ex like that. all the freaking time. and i don't know how to fix it either. so maybe zeke could figure that out for me? lol

keep up the good work, as always!

o0o0o0o what kind of game?

nice chapter, though short. i'm kind of confused... but i think that's just the tequila messing with me XD

oh, and i loved the line about dr suess. hehehe

update soon!

agh...please update soon your talented

it's so short though. Update quickly. Your an excelent writer. (and I'm a horrible speller) Your characters are awesomely done. awsome. so you must update.

Good show! I like the characters and I like the fact that you've chosen what some would call a controversial topic to somewhat revolve around (I say "some would" because I don't think it should be controversial at all. I think it's a very real, very normal topic). I have one suggestion: the chapters are kind of short and choppy. I would suggest making longer chapters and doing a bit more explaining (without giving away too much detail, of course :D). Overall, I am impressed.

It's good, it is, it's good stuff. But you've given us virtually no clue as to the appearance of the characters in the story. I understand that there's a considerable amount more written, but it would be a good idea, in the future, to etablish the physical details by the second chapter.

Well, cute is what we like.

I do like the ending, though short.

I get kind of confused sometimes with all the different characters. Granted, that's more than likely because I read so many stories on here, that often times I think bits and pieces accidentally mush together in my sleep or something. So I'll be reading a perfectly normal story and catch myself waiting for a vampire to pop out or something. Anywho, I'll try to get off that tangent as quickly as I was about to get on it...

Too late. Speaking of confusing characters, mine, I'm told, can be very confusing. See, I have this habit of calling people a gazillion different names (in real life) and that transferred over to my writing. Characters are called by middle names, first names, nick names... all listed of course, in hopes the readers can keep them straight... scratch that last bit... in hopes the readers can keep them IN ORDER. Hehehe

Alright, I'm off to go start singing along with the music from RENT at the top of my lungs. TOODLES! UPDATE SOON!

(sorry for my sparratic randomness or whatever you choose to call it. it's been a lo0o0o0ong week.)

Hi there! I stumbled across your story tonight... and didn't stop reading until I got here... It's very interesting, you see, and I find your work quite humorous. Not gonna lie, there's a few typos that make it confusing, but who doesn't have typos? Lord knows I do.

I hope for a soon update, because like I said, I'm intrigued and what to know what happens!

If Zeke doesn't choose Zeke, btw, I'll bitch slap him. *giggle*

I like Zeke's humer. "not gay" Zeke that is. You/ he have a great voice. My only suggestion is that you could put some of these together into longer chapters.