Reviews for From Where We Stand |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So I got confused in like mid chapter of [enter chapter in the middle some where]. I was all... "What?" Anyhow. Wonderful Story. It's like cocaine... without the whole 'you could die' thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Drugs, eh? That's not how you show your friends you care for them! Well, unless it's like Advil or something... Ah, I want to know what happened! So much mystery... |
![]() ![]() ![]() zeke and his mom are cute. i really wanna figure out whats up w/ anthony. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oo i wanna know what happened! update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wah, the drama! It's getting crazy! So...did someone spike Zeke's drinks, or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I BET THEY SPIKED HIS DRINKS WITHOUT HIM KNOWING! that would explain so much... and what's this tim business? and who did he yell at? i bet he told anthony he was gay! ahh so many questions! update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() o interesting story! i like it, a lot! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHH! okay so i haven't been on fictionpress in ages. over a year i'm sure. but the other day i was really depressed and i think i saw a notification for your story and i decided it would be a lovely distraction. so i went back and started to re-read previous chapters/get caught up. mission accomplished. i feel much better diving into fiction. so thanks... and HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT AT SUCH A TANTALIZING CLIFF HANGER? i hope you update son! i forgot how much i loved the zeke/zeke craziness. so when is zeke liam going to figure out his dad is having an affair with zeke wrigley's mom? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story, the only thing is that the chapters are way to segmented, they don't really say much before they are done, I read the 35 chps in one sitting so it was ok but it might feel frustrating getting the chps little by little... also, it seems like it's predictable but maybe not? like are kevin and ellie having an affari? (hope not but looks like it) is lawrence's mom sick/ dying and that's why he's the way he is? otherwise it's well written, interestin and fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the chapter! your describtion of the hangover was quite lifelike :D i really can't wait to read what happened that night... so update soon, please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh we still dun find out what happened w/ anthony. *cries* update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() With the basic concept of the preceding night revealed, other memories like little Harry Potters cast off their invisibility cloaks so that I could seem them for the magical teenage orphans they were. I took it to be a representation of the inside of my head, but something about it stunk of foreboding. I loathe literary devices. Oh PyroWriter, you slay me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One small flaw here... Oedipus didn't kill himself. His mother killed herself and Oedipus poked his eyes out with her broach, then asked to be escorted far out of town, so he would never have to face his flaws again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow. That must've been quite the party. Very dramatic :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() really interesting story so far. i keep wondering who everyone will eventually end up with...you're very good at the whole love triangle [or quadrilateral, perhaps?] plot line. i've added you to my alerts list. can't wait for more! :) |