O_O Wow. What the heck happened?

Ah, Charlie and Zeke are so cute _ But somehow I doubt it's gonna last.

Ah, Zeke is bonkers stoned :P ...a taco sounds like a good projectile.

Well, he's moving forward? And that last part reminds me of the "Don't Drive While You're Stoned" commercials...(I think they're only in Ontario...I dunno).

O_O Oh my. That there is some craziness.

Eh, I suppose I like Charlie well enough...

So, I'm figuring that Kevin and Ellie are actually having an affair. And Zeke chose Chris' group? Eh, not too surprised...wonder if he'll ever step out of the denial thing? And will Charlie actually work out this time? Hmm...

Dreams never lie!

I'd be very entertained if Zeke and Zeke ended up together. Zeke Squared XD

I like Chris :P And Charlie is just a jerk.

I really like that last paragraph _ A lot.

Wh00t, I was right about the identity of the secret boyfriend! XD And now things are gonna get very interesting, I'm guessing...

So far, very dramatic and very interesting _ I like the relationships between the characters and their personalities. I also like that it isn't obvious who everyone's going to end up with XD

" I was beginning to realize that Zeke was popular in the way that the Japanese were popular during World War II. Popular in the way Yoko Ono is popular with Beatles fans." As a Beatles fan, this made me giggle :)

Wow, there's a lot of shit going on here. Lots of backround info, lots of relationships/failed relationships, lots of people. I'll come back & read the rest of this when I have some time (because it's so long, that's gonna take awhile Lol), but, for now, let me give you kudos for giving such strong personalities to so many characters in only two chapters. This story is very, very interesting, and very, very realistic, and I look forward to reading it :)

Oh, & Zeke 2 is cute

I really love this story! I actually found it a few weeks ago but never had the time to review... so I'm doing it now, obviously.

Okay, so how can I begin?

Your writing style is just amazing, you use nice words to describe things and, in my opinion, it's all very easy to read (easy means 'you can read it very fluently' here :P ) and there are not many mistakes in it and everything... but English isn't my mother tongue so I'm not exactly the best judge of that whole language stuff.

Although i find idea of the story is quite simple, you really made it turn out to be something really interesting and creative, especially because every charakter is different and has his/her own problems, so nobody is perfect. You constantly surprised me with where the story was going and what is the most important for me, it's possible to see that this story is kind of planned and that you're working towards an ending.

Every part of the story seems to have a meaning and isn't just unnecessary or boring.

Okay, so that's it for now, I didn't really find anything that disturbed me about the story... so update soon, please, I can't wait to read what exactly happened that night )

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