Reviews for Breakaways
Ishotthealbatross chapter 1 . 11/27/2015 adorable, and the pace of the story was just oerfect!
bee bee chapter 1 . 7/9/2008

loved it more than i can rightly explain.
Sirivinda chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Aw, what a feel-good story. :) I love how it appears so effortless (I'm sure it wasn't though). You've a real flow in your language. I also like that you seem to have written with an agenda, namely that gay guys don't have to be limp-wristed screeching queens, but that they're like any other people. In addition the way the people around them are accepting and know that the being gay doesn't mean being oversexualized or not realizing when people are out of limits, or whatever. Despite that, and despite the fact that the text is so short, it doesn't seem like you're preaching, you know? Very well done indeed.
nonaccount chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Cute oneshot. I'm sorry I don't have anything constructive or worthwhile to impart to you. I do like that this story involves two masculine characters. Not that there's anything wrong with not-so masculine characters - it's just not a common occurrence on this site - so it's a nice change of pace.

I love how Cale redirects his anger at Andy, ". . . and you!" Adorable.
Esther chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
You know I already loved this story with a burning passion; you just still owe me more of it. My roomie is just an awesome writer :)