|Reviews for Dust of Bones|
| reach4thesky chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
I really like this. I love the sing-song (but in a good way) rhythm that shows up in a couple stanzas. ("Life is made of these, painful ashen memories" and "These moments define us, they free and confine us"). I also, like a lot of people it seems, like the "I Rebuild" at the end. So optimistic, but so hard!
| CynicalValentine98 chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
I wouldn't know anything about rebuillding, much prefer to avoid the whole thing, but I like the poem. Great work.
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
an amazing piece... full of imaginary and deep thought... i enjoyed reading this...
and while im here, id just like to thankyou. i know it seems strange, but i am.
from the sounds of it, youve made my friend, karone-sakura on here, a lot happier than shes been in a long time. So i thank you.
and please, keep writing these incredible poems...
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Excellent emotion and flow to this. I like the tone of the speaker, as it shifts from a somewhat pessimistic view to one of optimism. Very well written. The message is an important one.
| JagerCloud chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
Oh, those last words...they made my heart jump or sink or...I don't know. Whatever it did I loved it!
| E. A. Tetje chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
I love it! So very descriptive, I love the contrasts you used too. Good stuff. Bethy
| ginnyellen chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Greatness in a person is defined not by their monetary achievements, or they charm, but the way they come out stronger after a crash down.
"Stumble and fall, is the hard of it all...when you fall down, just try again."
Beautiful poem...you really have talent for this.
Can't wait for your next piece!
| Hate In The Form Of Passion chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Wow. I really don't like this one. And I love your work. This is a shocker to me... I mean... It felt I don't know. Rushed? I didn't feel that spark of amazement when I read this one. I think maybe it's the concept. I don't know.
| frayedlifeforce chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
this is beautiful. you wrote this so well - great imagery and everything was just really good. nice work.
| Liebchen Rose chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
| I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
I remain as impressed as usual. I love your work, Matt, but then you knew that already! :)
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Interestingly written, I liked the whole concept and the imagery was well-detailed, but the ending was unpredictable as I didn't expect the 'I rebuild' to be there at all. Good job, though.
| Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Wow... can't say anyting else *speechless*
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
the last line fits in so well! i love it. great job!
| Music Is Art chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
*sigh*why does that rebuilding have to be so difficult?