|Reviews for The River of Life|
| lost for words chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Not really so bad, but some of the rhymes feel a little forced.
| fading innocence chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
The first four lines were AWESOME, but then it started sucking...
| Glittering Innocence chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
you are really good at this
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
I like it (and I'm not just saying that) I think simplicity can be just as weighty as complicated poems; you did a good job here, be proud of yourself. Keep up the good work.