|Reviews for Mischievia|
| The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Aww! It's so sad and sweet and omg... There were a couple parts I really loved:
"The one with the many different maks laid out for her under the trash cane, but no real expression of her own besides that smile." It's SO sad. Aww... I read that and I was like 'this is incredible.'
"...with the wildly fluttering pulse and the painfully expanding heart much too big for it's cage." It reminds me (for some odd reason) of the part in Dr. Suess's "The Grinch" when his heart gets really big.
I love this piece and I think deep down, there's a little Mischievia inside all of us.
| Davvn chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Im pretty sure that Im missing the "big picture" behind this story, but I'll come back later, read it again, get it., and probably leaveanother review. Still. even without, I love this. The style is amazing, the imagery is beautifull, and alot of creative metaphors. This deserves a award. **gives MoonMistNight 'Most Beautiful Metaphor Story Award'**