Reviews for Something Blue
allancaldera chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
It was really sad and I feel bad for Shane hope they can be together at the end.
ToBreakMyFall chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
xXInnocentXx chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
That boy know good and well he is n GREAT denial XDDD
mmmmmtoasty chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
I usually don't like these kind of stories, but this one was excellent! Its was written beautifully and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Gen chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Love all the angst in this. David is so in denial, isn't he? ;)
mad-one123 chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
argh! god i hate u! ur one shots are all so good! damn i wish they were all big fat long stories with like 40 chapters for each of
persimmon chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Wow. Intense. And really beautiful. That whole thing, it was timed perfectly. The gradual build up of the tension and then the final explosion of emotion, just wow. I don't think anything I've read in ages has screamed with this much emotion. The only thing that wasn't absolutely perfect was this line here "As though inside he's not beginning to panic." The expression there just seemed a little convoluted and not altogether in keeping with the overall feel of the piece. But still...just the level of language and everything here... I mean, other than that one little thing it's practically perfect. It's just light years ahead of virtually everything else I've read here. Seriously. I don't say that lightly. Wow.
Darsh chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
I think I'm starting to catch on to the type of story that you like to write...

All your stories, the plot lines, the characters, seem to have no future, no hope. It's almost like a snapshot of their life, in that moment, without the pressure to do the "follow-up". Lol, do I make any sense? I bet it's very fun to write these pieces, and it also leaves the readers a lot of room for imagination.

It serves as a very refreshing break after reading a long novel where it's basically a sin if it doesn't end happily.

I really like the atmosphere and the setting of this particular story, but I can't help feeling a bit regretful with the whole... bleak situation. All the same, thanks for sharing!
Xx-Blue-Eyed-Fey-xX chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
oh no, its only a one-shot O.O it could b such an awsum story. well, still very nice. keep wring
yOURmYiDOL chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
You're so damn good at one shots but they're what makes your stories so special
Insaneagram chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
My god that was good... Is there more or was this a one off thing?
Aquafied chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
fuck love.

hairy-mushroom-nose chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
That's so intense! You really don't get enough reviews. You're a very talented writer. I'm hoping you write more stories! I have to say I don't usually read one-shots because I don't want stories to end. Ever.


Fanboy chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
That Was an awesome read. I love the line, "Do you love her like you said you loved me?" It really sets a good tone.

Love 'til, later,

forgotten-magick chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
nice story. i need to go check out the rest of your stuff now.

this was very well written.
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