Reviews for Brokenly Invisible
LilwenKeitha chapter 13 . 4/10/2008
sweet, very sweet.
Blei chapter 13 . 12/22/2007
oh update pleasee! this is great!
CaFFy chapter 4 . 5/19/2006
I like the story... I just notice that you mess up the POV sometimes... unless I've gone insane which is quite possible.
Esquirella chapter 10 . 3/28/2006
I think Richard needs to meet with a steamroller head on ... but that's just me.
Esquirella chapter 9 . 3/17/2006
A short but sweet chapter on what Sven's feeling.
Jayn chapter 9 . 3/16/2006
yay, update. I'm glad things are going well for them. PLEASE update!
bambi4real chapter 9 . 3/16/2006
Sven is too adorable. He needs more happy times.
Jayn chapter 8 . 3/15/2006
YAY! Friends! Lol. PLEASE update! Wonder why Lisa so mean at the moment...
Esquirella chapter 8 . 3/10/2006
That was a sweet chapter. Poor Sven.
bambi4real chapter 8 . 3/9/2006
The hug was supper sweet!
Esquirella chapter 7 . 3/6/2006
Wouldn't a social worker, especially in this day and age, take a child's word a bit more seriously? Just an observation.

Anyway, if Sven were moved from again, it might be better for him. His aunt's a real bitch and Richard's an ass.
bambi4real chapter 6 . 3/4/2006
that was an evil cliffie! I think it's either his mother or Miach. My bet is its mommy dearest.
Esquirella chapter 6 . 3/3/2006
It's Miach, isn't it? And now Sven will be in more trouble. Have I mentioned that I hate Sven's aunt? I do? And Richard is vile. But the story's cool.
bambi4real chapter 5 . 2/27/2006
i really like this story. you are doing an excellent job. i am intrigued by the mysterious sven.
Esquirella chapter 5 . 2/27/2006
It sounds like Sven needs to spend more time with someone other than his aunt and her boyfriend.
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