awesum wrk again.. u got me just so hooked to this ! bdw.. jst chk out on ur speells k ? jst correct da errors. those r da lil things dat take da beauty away. but its awesum nonetheless!

gues im a lil late for da hapy bday. but wel.. belated wishes would do if ud approve them ;)... i luv da way the 2 of u write it sems lyk its one though so its this one in many n many in one kinda thingie.. awesum wrk nonetheles... im jst soo lyk asia regarding da guy thingie!

Wowie! I LOVE this story! Vyn sounds so uber hot. I love Sumer's character too! UPDATE SOON!

ah... u got me hooked baby!...im more of an Asia... tough not on most things.. damn. i gues im half os Asia and half of Sum... ace on da guy part totally... ;)

yay you updated...okay now do it again...come on i know you can do it..okay bye bye now

dyam! do i luv dis thing or wat! i just soo luv it!... snd yeah..there r lil spellin errors here n there ... so crct them jst to make sure its PERFECT! ..and yeah i jst so luv dis.. so awesum job once agin!

hey, i get a shout out type thingy...yea, anyways, thanks :) catching spelling errors is all i do whilst reading. well, not all, but...lets say 60 percent. lol

another interesting chapter. you know, i never have much to say, cuz theyre all so good... now im hoping youll keep bugging her, cuz i want to see if he'll end up coming at night...doubt he wont, though, lol.

i saw no spelling errors this chapter, and no weird sentences. detail was good... did i ever say how much i love her sarcasticness? really makes her character full.

keep on writing ~~M.W. Renaee-::-

O_O Their dad.

TELL me that they won't go! That's nuts! They should go to the coffee just to piss off at him. That would be interesting.

Keep writing!

XxFallingxX

damn! waz dat gud or wat... il put u on mah list.. so i can read da rest od da stry latr..coz im in a kinda hury rite nw...neways.. uve got a gr8 flw and got me hooked! awesum wrk again!

spelling was generally good, but the one word that really stuck out was "techqnically". that should be "technically". grammar was good, and so was the description.

haha, so then asia and her crush got the lead roles? typical that one would happen :p and its a good thing the next chapter will come in a few days. thatd be cool and all.

keep on writing ~~Murrie W. Renee-::-

YAYAY!..UPDATE..OR...*COUGH*..SO YEA UPDATE!..WHO!..MONKEY!

I'm totally loving this story! You have to update! Please update soon! Bye!

lol, vyn is actually pretty funny. cant wait to see much more of him in later chapters!

anyways, well, spelling wasnt...awesome. i mean, there werent any major spelling errors, but when you meant to say 'hot' you said 'hat'. vyn isnt 'hat'. got my point? theyre tiny, but still noticable, and i think that its those sort of things that are the most annoying.

anyways, other than that, there was another awesome chapter. so, im awaitin the next one, and keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-::-

*gasps* Vyn isn't a bitch! (From chapter 7)

And Antonio...xD Haha, Asia couldn't contain herself. Embarrassing, but so funny to watch. xD

Keep writing!

XxFallingxX

haha, proud, proud very proud. and happy :D

anyways, as always, this was an awesome chapter. yea, i get that feeling; when youre stomach is growling at you to feed it some food, and theres just nothing good to eat. thats when i decide to eat cheereos. no, not honey nut cheereos, because no one in the house bothers to get that kind XD so i sprinkle lots of sugar on it. it tastes...sweet. lol

well, i cant say much else. i mean, i mustve given you a lot of compliemtns in the first couple of chapters, am i right? -checks- yea, i am.

sos, anyways, keep on writing, and update soon ~~Wintertigress-::-