Reviews for Cocoon
Medievilish chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
When I was reading this, I experienced a chill. It really was that good to me. I can't say much, but this poem really flowed well. I love the rhetorical questions.
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
When one comes out of a cocoon, aren't the changes supposed to be for the better? Another good metaphor used in your poems.

EB
Morcirith chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
someone's standing on the edge of a break through...wavering on whether or not take the jump...are you going to?
nofaceme chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
I like the description of feeling cramped...very different. I liked it. Keep up the good work!