Reviews for a little light music
emsworth chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
my darlin', be careful what you put in your summary..i love the first half and like the second. my favourite line is "as they dig at it, six times six"
J. N. Laerasyn chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
That was beautifully written. The repeated "as they" wasnt bad- it was consistent, but I didnt notice it until you pointed it out. I like the way you start off describing the scenery- quite artfully, might I add- and how it contrasts to what one would think the mood of the place would be... if that made any sense. My own experience with the only funeral I've ever been to is somewhat different, but I think I heard that music too, at the end... I was left with, I think, the same feeling. Nice work.