Reviews for The day to fly
butterfly-touch chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
I like this poem. I love the imagery and the rhyme meter. It's great how you've woven all those words together to make a poem many can relate to. Good job!

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eden is burning chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
Aww... Very, sort of, bittersweet though I don't know if that's the word. I liked it good job.