Reviews for Invisible Ink |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, I read this story a long time ago. And guess what? I cried so much, but I finally accept that Aden wasn't going appear in the air, but when I read the epilogue... I fall in love with your story. Regards, Diane Potter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to assume that Seth is possessed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, I want Seth and her to become friends. (is it wrong that I kind of like the idea of SethXLor more then AdenXLor?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. God. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dundundun |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god, a perverted ghost! :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() ENDING WAS GREAT ! [: |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it! i cried at the end! even though the endings was sad i really liked it! charlotte |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wish seth was more evil and sadistic. although thats a bad thing to wish for anyone. lol. but he's getting it back... slowly.. lol. and aden has a H? Hayden? lolwtfbbqbizplalala. pineapple. nice to see that he's back though. ;D both endings are good. both with and without the ending. so in this case he got reincarnated? sounds good. heeh! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() ! no wonder rox said 'bye'.. eh. i guess she'll have to get on with life.. what a sad way to part. bleh. i wish there was a happy ending. although i guess her living with seth now would be okay? since seth is no longer psychotic? or if not then they would just blow up at each other until someone dies or something.. lol. i'll check out the epilouge. i love aden's letter though. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm. seth seems better. alot better. and aden is gonna leave soon. i only wish it had a disney ending where lor died unexpectedly, then she became a ghost, then she and aden sailed off in a pirate ship happily ever after. not to mention soon after seth would die too (cause his life sucks anyway), then he would realise that lor was a ghost too, and aden was a ghost too, and he was a ghost too, then he would go off on the adventure of his lifetime (or afterlife-time) to go find lor and he would fight to earn her love back and aden wouldn't give in and they would live happily ever after having many many more adventures together forever. like hell that would happen, but thats just something i would like to imagine. hahah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wish seth was a bit more feisty. bleh. ahahha. and why is everyone hiding so many things? eaugh. i wanna find out. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() seth is quite pitiable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sigh. why must aden leave. oh well.. at least seth is back! woohoo! even if he is pretty much a dick when he's okay. but for now, while he is still semi-invalid, i actually find him okay. and i pity his emaciated look. that really sucks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, christmas.. lol. hearing how seth is, i'm actually pitying him.. oh well. being a friend to seth is okay i guess, but NOT a boyfriend. :p |