|Reviews for Frigid|
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
'white winter floating' - such beautiful imagery! i love it!
| bleed gilead chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
i somehow think that condensed to a haiku, it loses a lot of the grace. as forlorn as the images are, they connect- well, they don't. they should and they can, but the haiku format doesn't give you enough time in this particular scenario. i'd suggest a slight expansion (still short but longer than a haiku) to let the poem flesh out by itself.
| frayedlifeforce chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
pretty, great imagery. you have a real feeling for hakius. nice work./
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
turning with the cold beautiful
and chilly bays remind me of winter whispers, cold and unfeeling
| Nivek Relleom chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
very pretty and thought provoking. nice job.
| miss understanding chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
I love haiku poetry ... so simple, and yet so elegant. This poem makes me think of a tropical haven.
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
so delicate and beautiful. nice work!