Aww...my eyes burn with tears, as melodramatic as that may sound. It's very heroic of him not to drink blood even though he knows he's going to die. Five stars!

Oi! Genius! That was brilliant! Now why didn't I think of that before? You've just inspired me. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Aw! *teary eyes* I love it...

i've always wanted to do a "maral vampire" kind of story, but u got to it first but my vampires wouldnt hav as much will to die as yours though)

back to ur story. its still a cool concept, and i like how his girlfriend is there with him, unnafraid. he's kinda like an anti-sleeping beauty (dying with a kiss instad of waking with one) thumbs up for this story

Interesing and original concept...very much so indeed.

Sweet, that was way way cool. Aw it makes me want to write a short story rather than laboring over these tiresome novels all the time. I think I shall. Its good. My only suggestion, if I may, is that you watch you tenses... they seem to get mixed up when you switch from his thoughts to his narration. Its a little confusing. Otherwise great it up.

Whoa... puts you on edge. This is going in my favs. I like the way you did this. I have never thought about making a vampire hate the Thirst so much that they ignore it altogether... I have made them hate the Thirst, but never not drink all together. This puts a new perspective on vamps.

Greyfox

VAMPIRES RULE!

I LOVE YOU DAVE!*bounces for joy*Great story. Nice biblical reference.