Reviews for State of paralysis
Beena chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Wow, that was completely amazing. I fell in love with the last line. "Home-abortion" confused me a lot though, I read the line a few times and it wasn't until I read the whole thing that I understood the last stanza.

However it was spectacular.
limpwrist chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Simple, but intense and powerful.
Vince Loring chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
this is very nice. very very nice. i wish i could write stories like this, but i cant write stories. my paticular muse likes poetry over prose. the only question that comes out of this, is are you english, or just decided to have england as the setting?
Shiro.Kokoro chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
This is pretty much downright amazing. I really, really like it. Your writing is fantastic-and this story is SAD but still just awesome.
aberlemno chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
I haven't seen much narrative poetry on this site, so it's great to find one, especially one this good. The imagery and details really make it one of those poems that you remember.
xxNick chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
This is really good. I enjoyed it. :)
Doxology chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I don't have to tell you that this is amazing. It's awful tragic, and I didn't want it to end.

Peace & Love

~ Hp
beyond.that.horizon chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
effing beautiful
servatis-a-pereculum chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
This is seriously one of your best pieces...
autumn berrington chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
very nice. its has a poetic fictiony feel to it! you have a great writing style!

juxtapositions chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
this is a beautiful reality. it thought you expressed real life with a perfect imperfection, without resorting to cliches and well-worn language. i loved it.
xAngel of SorrowX chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
wow, this was really awesome. I like the story in it a lot. _
Thesunflowerinyourhairrr chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
wow.i am so reminded me of me and one of good friends mixed together in your main character , this was exquisite.i think this might be my all time 's gorgeous.
Tanaboo chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
wow i never know what to say in these! as brillant as always! i loved i x
Iloveplotbunnies chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Wow, I totally understand this poem and it's good I saw no problems with it and like I said it's really good.
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