Reviews for Daisygirl
PeanutButterKn1fe chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
I love your poetry, it's so powerful.
One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
This was a good poem.

I liked the irreverant narration to it, and the ending twist - 'you're just jealous' - because a lot of Anorexics tend to feel that way.

Also, I liked the first stanza's format, whether intentional or not (I'm guessing it was deliberate), it really worked for the story.

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SkinnyPancakes chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
I love it. I love the shape that you made it too.
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
ha, this is so true. I like the shape of your poem.

how is it that fat people can call people skinny with a look of disgust on their face, but skinny people can't look in disgust at fat people?
Kirane chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
I'm reading through your poems now, and although the phrasing in this poem doesn't strike me as much as some of your others, I just had to comment on the format. I love how it gets thinner. I don't see poets play with the shape of their poems nearly as much as I'd like to.
realityescapesher chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
the form of this is flawless and really emphasises the idea of anorexia. wonderfully done.

the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
oh jesus. the format is tight-lacingly CRUEL. gorgeous black dripping denial... i fucking LOVE it
Girl Brushed Sunshine chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
absolutely beautiful.
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
wow you took the words and feelings right out of my mouth ive been there and know exactly how it felt to be that way- and still feel a little like that...loved it
Written chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
that's perfect, and so tragic.
astral boy chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
cool. i liked the title, and the straighten, smarten widen part.

thanks for your kind reviews.
lackluster chapter 1 . 2/26/2006 speaks for itself, i think.
Bananas in a Blender chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
Completely random, but I love how the lines at the top look like an ice cream cone.

Awesome writing, and I loved the title.

Reading your poems makes me feel like I'm just barely skimming the surface of the meaning behind them.

And it makes me laugh insanely, then tell the voices in my head to shut up.
la-mocha chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Summer Shudder chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
This is definitely one of my favourites out of your poems. It just says...well, pretty much everything about anorexia. I especially like how you shaped the words so that the whole thing got thinner. And the last line, it ends the poem beautifully. I love the way you write. It's! Keep writing!
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