Wow. So true; what people think as someone walks away. But you don't only have that; not only the retreating also have some of their thoughts in what happens; how they walk. As if they're fighting to run back, but they don't want to or can't face well written!*bows*

Hey! Nice job again lol what happened to showing me your poems beforehand? lol great job though... I like the "if if if" part