Reviews for Your Lips
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
I love it.. the beginning is great and perfectly described and that ending was kinda funny
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
FOr this having no solid inspiration it's really good. Heartfelt and passonate, and those are hard to weave into the same poem. It's like you wrote about knowing the feeling already but still aching to experience it for the first tme. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.