|Reviews for Always|
| Moonpie Aristotle chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
I can't believe how much your writing style has changed for the better since the summer, it's freakin awesome. I'm so happy to see that we both share this hobby advidly.
Who exactly or what is the inspiration behind this piece? I am very curious to know. Also, I admire the vernacular in this particular poem and how you manage to make the theme and meter flow so rythmically.
A critique I have so far for this piece is the title. I think you could really connect it to the theme much better than what you have now however, poetic rights come to play.
That's all 4 now!