Reviews for she was too strong for her Samson
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
oh, gorgeousness unfiltered. the parallels are striking & beautiful, i loved the cosmopolitan/lovers line. i am off to read more such stupendous poetry.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
my mind keeps producing the Biblical Samson whenever i read the title, which is odd as i am not a devot Catholic/Christian/whatever, and it always stuck me odd when i read of the hair and everything: Achilles, Samson's tale always seemed to make my mind wander to so. [call me an idiot if i am thinking of someone else, as i am not too sure myself if i remeber him as Samson or SamPson. :/] anyway, this is quite lovely. i am more then fickle when it comes to word use and i just love how heartbreaking and perfect this is. lovelylovely.

* noelle
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
wow, mysterious, vivid imagery wow, nicely done

keep writing!