Reviews for My Baby Sister
Chaotic0ne chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
The bond between two siblings is somewhat of a miracle within itself... Makes me want to call my little brother. Loved it. Keep it up.
kayttea chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
I can relate to this very much. ) I like the loyal little me part. you're a good writer!
ChasingPerfection chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
I like the image of your little sister waiting for you...I picture her sitting at a front window staring at the driveway like the kids in Cat in the Hat, not traditional haiku but there are places for both in this world so I'll forgive you ;)
Bronzeage chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Very nice, at last a haiku that means something.
La Gitane chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Aw, lovely. So sweet. Although I feel pressed to note that the last line is almost slightly creepy, that might just be me being weird.
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
I liked how you ended this, you're pretty good with these haikus.
Emily Marie chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
I love your haikus. This is my favorite. I love how you word your haikus and how you put them together. Very very nice.

I have a younger sister too.
likes to headbang chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
nicely written
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Wonderful sentiment. Well written.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
aw, younger siblings i know not

quite nice though
Needa S chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Sweet, nicely done.
hey maria chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Aw. That's sweet.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Aw! Cute! I like! Write on! _