Reviews for My Baby Sister |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The bond between two siblings is somewhat of a miracle within itself... Makes me want to call my little brother. Loved it. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can relate to this very much. ) I like the loyal little me part. you're a good writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the image of your little sister waiting for you...I picture her sitting at a front window staring at the driveway like the kids in Cat in the Hat, lol...hm...again not traditional haiku but there are places for both in this world so I'll forgive you ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice, at last a haiku that means something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, lovely. So sweet. Although I feel pressed to note that the last line is almost slightly creepy, that might just be me being weird. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked how you ended this, you're pretty good with these haikus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your haikus. This is my favorite. I love how you word your haikus and how you put them together. Very very nice. I have a younger sister too. |
![]() ![]() nicely written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful sentiment. Well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, younger siblings i know not quite nice though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet, nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. That's sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! Cute! I like! Write on! _ ~Anna~ |