Reviews for My Baby Sister
Chaotic0ne chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
The bond between two siblings is somewhat of a miracle within itself... Makes me want to call my little brother. Loved it. Keep it up.
kayttea chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
I can relate to this very much. ) I like the loyal little me part. you're a good writer!
ChasingPerfection chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
I like the image of your little sister waiting for you...I picture her sitting at a front window staring at the driveway like the kids in Cat in the Hat, lol...hm...again not traditional haiku but there are places for both in this world so I'll forgive you ;)
Bronzeage chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Very nice, at last a haiku that means something.
La Gitane chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Aw, lovely. So sweet. Although I feel pressed to note that the last line is almost slightly creepy, that might just be me being weird.
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
I liked how you ended this, you're pretty good with these haikus.
Emily Marie chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
I love your haikus. This is my favorite. I love how you word your haikus and how you put them together. Very very nice.

I have a younger sister too.
likes to headbang chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
nicely written
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Wonderful sentiment. Well written.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
aw, younger siblings i know not

quite nice though
Needa S chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Sweet, nicely done.
hey maria chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Aw. That's sweet.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Aw! Cute! I like! Write on! _

~Anna~