Reviews for Past Within Pages
pianogal chapter 17 . 6/19/2006
well, based on the way you ended the last chapter i really think a sequel would be better. probably with them meeting a few years down the road and seeing what happens from there. it would be interesting to read.

yeapitsacar chapter 17 . 6/18/2006
I know this doesn't help, but end it how you feel you should end it.

If you have the energy for a sequel, then write a sequel... If you just want to end it, then write one more chapter to end it.

That's my opinion
pianogal chapter 16 . 4/3/2006
aw, i can't believe this is over. all throughout the story i wanted Jaden and Riley to just get back together but with the way the story went with Riley continually pushing him away and just that one moment of weakness, i thought it was a great ending. definetely surprising...but great. can't wait for more stories!

Olivine chapter 16 . 4/2/2006
wait... so is this the last chapter? i couldnt really tell...but from the last few paragraphs, it sort of seemed that way...

well, typos were few, but the ones that were there were pretty noticable. there were also some words missing in a few sentences, at the beginning. good description, though, as always.

yea, so if this is the end, well... to be honest, its sort of awkward. i understand that riley became all nice over that past year, and all, but it ended too... nicely. im not sure what exactly to call it, but its still a little odd.

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-::-
theeighthhouse chapter 15 . 3/30/2006
and jaden doesnt look so meek anymore..
pianogal chapter 15 . 3/30/2006
a surprise ending? i'm not sure if i like the sound of that...but, i loved this chapter...up until the point where Riley pushed Jaden away. lol. i thought maybe Riley was finally just going to let something more happen...but, nope. can't wait for more no matter how many more chapters you have. great job!

Olivine chapter 15 . 3/29/2006
surprises are good! well... good surprises are good... yea, anways...

short, but nice. i actually agree with you, there; that was a good place to end. keeps us thinking and wondering, does it not? well it does to me.

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-::-
Aruru chapter 14 . 3/27/2006
Aw...How cute.
pianogal chapter 14 . 3/26/2006
ah! Jaden is finally moving in on Riley. is she going to allow it? or will she push him away again? she was finally being nice to him...i hope she doesn't push him away. can't wait for more!

bex17 chapter 14 . 3/25/2006
You have to use question marks. Because your not, and it sounds weird...
Olivine chapter 14 . 3/25/2006
sorry for the cliffhanger? are you kidding me? this story just keeps on gettin better and better!

keep on writing and update soon ~~Wintertigress-::-
pianogal chapter 13 . 3/25/2006 she just gonna admit that she still loves Jaden? it's so obvious to everyone else except her. i'm so loving this story though still. great job!

Olivine chapter 13 . 3/24/2006
lol, youre welcome. :)

anyways, this is going really good, now. it seems that riley is really breaking, now. so shes been cheating on brad, and on dan? ha, any other boyfriends, there?

keep on writing and update soon ~~Wintertigress-::-
pianogal chapter 12 . 3/23/2006
yeah, i did see Riley getting close and then pulling away again. and i understand why you are doing it that way. great job! can't wait for more.

Olivine chapter 12 . 3/22/2006
lol, yea i got it all. do you remember, from, like, the first couple of chapters, when i told you that it was sort of starting to come together? that was when you were telling their past story, and whats going on now. it all makes sense, now, just so you know.

except riley doesnt. shes really annoying, but i guess she was better, once. when she was 17. when jaden and her were in love... shes so stubborn! i cant get over that!

"im dragging this story out a little more than i would normally, but its necessary because they cant be just together all of a sudden and everything would be perfect."

so then they will get together? thats what you sort of hinted in the authors note...

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-::-
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