Reviews for No Longer Loving You
lordelfy chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Aww this poem makes me want to cry because recently i went through something like this. You do a wonderful job at putting the emotions out there! Good poem i really like it!
Fate Defied chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
wow... this is definitely my favorite. the ending was my favorite part. wonderful word choice. i also liked "I feel like I'm falling in you, until i hit the floor" this would make a really good song to listen to.

Dragonzz chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
I love the way this rhymes! I really like the lines, 'I feel like I’m falling in you,Until I hit the floor…'

Great job

Alysia Leak chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
The rhyme and rhythm are consistent. I love the concept, and message. Great Write.:)