Reviews for The Deal with Satan's Son
LilLaTLuv chapter 3 . 3/9/2006
Hey!

LOL! That is so good! HEHEHE! I loved these chappies! Sorry I missed them, but I have this play and it's coming close to the perfomances (NEXT WEEK!), so I don't have much time...SORRY! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE? I'll check it out when I can!

Luv ya,Tashi :)
Esquirella chapter 3 . 3/6/2006
Looks like Duncan's REAL plan seems to be working on schedule. Great chapter.
Grape chapter 3 . 3/5/2006
Sweet chapter! Its really amazing! Hehe.I love it! I cannot wait until the next chapter is posted, I didn't even realize it was, when I did, I was like OMG! YES! *laughs*
Lady of romance world88 chapter 3 . 3/5/2006
Hey! wow! Duncan and Lark now together because of bet. Will Lark going to fall in love with Duncan not Brent? Hurry update soon.
Mi chapter 3 . 3/5/2006
Great story! I can't wait to see what Duncan has planned lol Update soon!
alyssa chapter 3 . 3/5/2006
wow such a good story already! and i am in love with duncan lol.. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i can't wait for some more duncan/lark action.
kelyn chapter 3 . 3/5/2006
lol, i just love it. nuff saidK
Chel-Chang chapter 3 . 3/5/2006
haha i blush like mad too! OMG i still ove it, 'm over hear trying to read it quickly, so i can find out what happens, I vote Duncan and Lark! Pretty name it is...lol update soon! please!
kjnhgtfrdefgh chapter 3 . 3/5/2006
Haha, this is getting more and more interesting lol. Wonderful chapter, PLEASE update as soon as you can dude. Write on.

- Celie
Chel-Chang chapter 2 . 3/4/2006
Wow! I loved this so much! Dude/Dudie, I swear my eyes were touching the screen! I was like" oh shit! KISS HER!" lol but yeah, *aigh* not yet, lol maybe...later. But it was really good, I loved it, you wrote it perfectly, I *few* mistakes, but nothing serious! AH! UPDATE SOON!

-KoiTenchi
Esquirella chapter 2 . 3/2/2006
LOVE the plot for this one!
shuushuu chapter 2 . 3/2/2006
Hehe

This story is totally funny! I love it.

I think that I love Duncan the best but I don’t know what Brent’s character is like at the moment so I guess I can’t judge too quickly. All I know is that if my best friend left me without a ride to school because he wanted to go with a girl…oh I would kick his butt so bad! LOL! And he would most probably get a lecture about friendship in front of a huge group of people.

I really want to see how the characters develop. Especially Duncan and Lark as there seems to be a lot of sexual tension between them. The fact that she thinks he’s sexy is a good start. LOL!

I wasn’t going to review before but I just had to because the story is just too good!

I swear the humour is so good that I was actually laughing out aloud when I was reading it!

You have so got to post soon because I can’t wait for the next chapter.

Kept up the funniness, I love it to bits and I can’t wait to see how Duncan and lark get together, coz they are the ones that are getting together right?

Okay I think that I have ranted on for way too long but I just wanted to tell you how much I liked the story. Hehe!

DDF X
FalseXxThrills chapter 2 . 3/1/2006
hey i love your story ) keep it up
kelyn chapter 2 . 3/1/2006
lol, awesome i can't wait to read more. i love duncans character!

K
Grape chapter 2 . 3/1/2006
This is really awsome, I forgot it was the last chapter, so I went to go click to the next one..and..ACH!I was disappointed to say the least. Anyways, this is awsome! I really love it! I hope the next chapter pops out soon!
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