Reviews for The Deal with Satan's Son
completely anonymous chapter 2 . 3/1/2006
This was really good, i can't wait to find out what happens next.
A.M. Dawn chapter 2 . 3/1/2006
good job, again hun...
ANS chapter 2 . 3/1/2006
great stroy line. really. defenitly on my favs list. UPDATE SOON!
kjnhgtfrdefgh chapter 2 . 3/1/2006
"Whoever invented school needs to be shot."

Amen to that! lmao.

Lovely chapter. And the bet has finally commenced! Muwha! lol, PLEASE update as soon as you can dude.

- Celie
Eternally Eris chapter 2 . 3/1/2006
You don’t mind a little constructive criticism, do you? To make sure I don’t start this on a sour note, I do like your story very much and it has great potential. However (the dreaded but/however), you distract me horribly with Duncan and Lark’s conversation. About every single time Duncan says something to Lark, he says her name in it. Maybe he is obsessive with her name, it is part of his character, or something to that extent but it honestly irks me. It’s distracting. When you talk to a person you don’t say his/her name with everything you say. Now, I’m not trying to offend you; however, I do feel this would be a little bit of good advice if you take it properly. Otherwise, a lovely story idea. You’re on my author alert list, so you’ll be likely to see more of me if you don’t tell me otherwise. Good luck!
Grape chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
Awsome! I really like how you write, its good! *laughs* I hope that you post the next chapter ASAP!
A.M. Dawn chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
haha! I remember this story now... but forgive me if I cringe everytime I see "Brent"... *shudders* bad memories... update soon, girlie, and love ya lots!

Caycee aka Avaelin
ChaoticBunny chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
Good story! It's very well written. I think maybe Duncan and Lark will get hooked up, but who knows? Well, except you anyway. I think she might either hook up with Brent or Duncan, probably.
LilLaTLuv chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
Hey!

I agree with Vanessa! I think he HAS been putting up a front to everyone! Including her! HEHEHE! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE? I really wanna see what happens to her!

Luv ya,Tashi :)
Chel-Chang chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
Oh wow thats really writtin well. And i happened to like it alot. Please so write more longer chapter! Thank you.

-KoiTenchi
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
great story. i'm interested to know what will happen next. great last 2
kjnhgtfrdefgh chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
Lark, wow that's an interesting choice for a girl's name, but interesting none the less lol. It's very different, I like it lol. This looks really good so far, PLEASE update as soon as you cann dude. I can't wait for more!

- Celie
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