Reviews for The Deal with Satan's Son
gulistala chapter 8 . 12/3/2008
Well hell. I saw this coming.
gulistala chapter 6 . 12/3/2008
You can tell Duncan is the smarter of the two brothers when it comes to making plans. If Brent had acted first, would she and Duncan gotten this far?
gulistala chapter 5 . 12/3/2008
I think Duncan very well knew that Brent had feelings for her. But so does Duncan. Oh dear.
gulistala chapter 4 . 12/3/2008
Oh so Brent DOES like her! D
Daydreamer-angel chapter 13 . 9/21/2008
I loved the story from beginning to end. it was awesome.
I Murder on Impulse chapter 13 . 9/10/2008

Mai-'-Kawaii-'-Ai chapter 13 . 8/25/2008
yay! i love this story
thisaccountisdeadNOW chapter 13 . 8/14/2008
I think I can safely say that this is one of the worst stories I've come across on FP so far. I really don't understand what all the hype is about - your writing is terrible!

And when we move past that, there's the fact that all that ever seems to occur between the main protagonists are fights and kisses and the most stupidest angst ever. Where's the development? I didn't see any!

Boohoo, her crush doesn't love her. Boohoo, his crush prefers his step-brother.

Big deal - I've read better stories.
l0v3abl3 chapter 13 . 7/25/2008
I loved it. It's awesome.

- l0v3abl3
ladydragon93 chapter 9 . 7/15/2008
Great story so far, I'll be sure to read more of it soon!
rockjam chapter 13 . 7/7/2008
aw.. Such a cute ending. Loved the story.
Hazelnut Romance chapter 13 . 7/6/2008
nice story with a different plot!
BeautyIsn'tSkinDeep chapter 13 . 6/30/2008
that was a short ending but still brilliant, you couldn't have written anything else :)
Skeptic-Critic chapter 13 . 6/30/2008
I can't believe it's over...I'm overjoyed that it ended the way I wanted it to at least...I'm tearing up now knowing that it really is over...And I won't have these updates to look forward to anymore...I'm always terribly sad when a story ends...Even if I do love the ending...Very very happy...
Jay827 chapter 12 . 6/29/2008
ah poor little Brent. it's alright Duncan is so much better for her. oh god only the epilogue left.
327 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 7 14 .. Last Next »