Reviews for My Dirty Little Secrets |
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![]() ![]() ![]() it is rely good pleaz finish it or at lest right more i rely love it it is a grate story and i love hoe evry chapter is some one else presctive |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw...! So sad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I like this chappie and the one before that. |
![]() ![]() hey im really enjoyin this story n i cant wait 4 more... keep up da great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story a lot which is why I'm going to give you some constructive chapters, I think they're too short. The events in them are great, and could use some more detail. This is a fun story, go back and read over it and revise it I say. Maybe this is just me being mad that there is no more story to read as of right now, I than that, I have no other complaints. It's a good story, good plot, great characters and you seem like a good author. So, lengthen your chapters and you're good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() muy interesante. Continue por favor.(Very interesting. Continue please.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is very cool...go Freedom! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OKAY...i finished...duh...AND i like where its going. Some major hyper moments which is cool and then chill moments...and then random killer... but hey! your imagination right? continue! Shana |
![]() ![]() ![]() OKAY...so far it's been really random and fun and i like random and fun. BUT...i work at a pharamacy... 6 Tylenol can no kill you. If you take more then 10 in a day, you will have major kidney problems and all those fun kidneys problems which in the end...could be rather bad. BUT...6 does not kill... Just wanted to let ya kno to clear that up. Oh... isaac...he's pov chapter seemed kinda of girly. In my opinion i thought maybe you should make him sound less "OMG!" not that he said that...i hope you get what i mean. IN NO WAY...am i saying this sucks...cuz i really like it. Ill continue reviewing. KEEP IT UP. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha, I already really like this. Keep writing! Oh, you already have-Guess I'll just dawdle off to read to 2nd chapter then. Nice job on this one! Good dialogue, somewhat believable situations/settings... um... I've got more to say, just can't rememebr what it was... i'll get back to you on it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMGOSH. Okay...i dont have enough time right now to read every chap but once i can...im gonna review the hell out of you. KEEP IT UP! Shana |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, im really surprised that youve not been getting any reviews! lol, this is really awesome so far! unfortunately, i dont have time to read the other two chapters, so ill have to come back. but i WILL come back, i promise :) keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-::- |