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   PearlinTheMist chapter 45 . 8/20/2006 and you couldn't have combined those two tid bits because?...hope yall are ok by the way, update for real, soon? |
| BloodyDestiny chapter 45 . 8/20/2006 WHAT did Theo do? did she really kill herself? Oh no... anyways keep up the good work. |
| ebonydragon chapter 45 . 8/20/2006 Oh My GOD! THis is such a wonderful story! Please keep it up, and I prmise I will review every single next chapter! Please! I NEED MORE STORY! |
| Schloss chapter 32 . 8/19/2006 havent read all of it yet, getting there, great so far! |
| PearlinTheMist chapter 44 . 8/19/2006 heya, good chapter, i guess. I still love the story though. |
| Aruru chapter 43 . 8/1/2006 Neh,,update by the 10th and I'll love youz 4evuh, my birthday. yay! Love with love My Love, No Smoking, Babe. |
| SkepticCritic chapter 43 . 7/19/2006 It's ending? Aw... |
| PearlinTheMist chapter 43 . 7/16/2006 *throws carrots at the both of you. growl. The middle of August? do you know how long of a wait that is! It'll be a nice birthday present I guess lol. My Birthday is almost smack dab in the middle of the , *sighs* |
| hopefulwriter1 chapter 42 . 7/10/2006 its good. keep going! |
| saltyfish chapter 42 . 7/3/2006 who is tristan? some perv from a past life? |
| Olivine chapter 42 . 6/27/2006 aww, isaac is awesome. i do wonder, though, how man times have i changed my opinion of him? well, i love him right now. :) and its okay, for the wait. everybody's busy, you know. to tell you the truth, i havent updated my own story since longer. except, i did yesterday, since then. anyways, well, just update soon. keep on writing ~~MWR-::- |
| SkepticCritic chapter 42 . 6/27/2006 I'm still here...And with all likelihood, I'll still be here at the end...I have stories that haven't updated since February...Of 2005 that I still have under my lists, that I still check daily, waiting for an update...Trust me, it takes a while to discourage me... And so, we finally know why Isaac's there... |
| PearlinTheMist chapter 42 . 6/26/2006 No, you can't end a chapter like that, it seems, like it hasn't been closed properly. Please please please please PLEASE go back and revise this story if you feel the urge and repost it. I love it to death but the short updates and long waits in between (excuses excuses yall. JK, haha) make me soon (or else) please! I can't wait to read the rest |
| BloodyDestiny chapter 42 . 6/26/2006 what a great present. Keep up the great work. |
| Bloodsinger chapter 1 . 6/20/2006 Gr...why didn't I know about this? *grumbles* I was away for too long, wasn't I? Oh well, that's what I get. It's going to take forever to read all 41 chapters. Anyway, great job you guys. Not too surprising, really. That you did a good job, I mean. There are several grammatical issues though. I'll go through some for reference: "...school... uneventful, eventful... and..." It might be better if you were to use either a semicolon or an em dash to replace the first elipses since elipses are generally used to show speech trailing off. The second elipses would just be a comma either way. "smiled weakly, 'Are...'" I think a period as opposed to the comma might be more suiting. When read with the comma, the sentence reads too much like a run-on. The period indicates a longer pause and lets the reader rest a bit before moving on. "...to see him, Felix..." Same thing, a period would be more suiting. A colon would work as well. "...address 'peasants' like my sister and I, we're probably 10x richer..." First off, there'd be full quotes around "peasants", not those wimpy little apostrophes. Also, you'd use "me", not "I", and the second clause after the comma is a fragment. It would be better to use a transition such as: "...me, even though we're probably 10 times...". You'd use "times" and not "x", too. That's pretty much it. I love the dialogue; it's extremely realistic. can't wait to read the rest (when I find the time). |