Reviews for i can't stop trying
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
i love the rapidfire emotion in this. all the parentheses you use & the great flow. it's a tidal wave of personal pain & hurt. lovelove it.

kait
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
Love your pieces and this is no exception.
Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
Nice... as always. Awesome emotion put into this and it just make it seem like things are becoming a little clearer. nice work!
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
great poem. i love the style, how you put somee things in paranthesees. good job ;)dropsofjewpiter
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
The ending is so hard and cold.