Reviews for I M P E R F E C T I O N S
alter-ego52 chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
Great poem, good choice of words, with a good message behind them all. The only thing was that you had so many bold words, it kinda got hard to stay focused after a while.
Most Immature chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
I personally think the bolding and underlining does emphacize your point, but it also hurts people's eyes when it mixes with 's nice interesting poem. It's pretty straight-foward... :)
always gats b y chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
:O aw, this is so touching (in a sad way)! love the format though. keep writing!