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les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
Stunning. Absolutely stunning.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
So tragic. :( I'm sorry to hear this. Good poem! Keep writing!

~Anna~
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
great poem. i love the line 'no longer is there meaning in this twisted turn of fate' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~