Wow...that was very poignant indeed. I loved the words that you used, and the last few lines was just so heart-wrenching. Well done, well done indeed. I'm sure lots can relate.

Tragically beautiful. Great poem. Deep meaning.

So tragically beautiful.

Truly touching. -wipes tear- Very brilliantly written. I like how you had the "staccato" feeling to it... short and neat descriptions which portray so much. -claps-