|Reviews for Lia|
| Awaking kills the Dream chapter 3 . 2/28/2006
This is definitly a story you should continue :) I'm very much looking forward to your next chapter (heh, I like girls who seem daft or weird to the outside world, but in reality they are complex beings, often much more than your average person)
Awaking kills the Dream
| Liquid Block of Fire chapter 3 . 2/26/2006
this is a really great beging to a story. there are several lines i just love "The girl's mind seemed to be trailing behind her body most of the time" "they cut her tree and with it, her childhood"and that whole part about blind people an colors, the way you put it will make people think.
| equites chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
i like your style and shift in narrative, though i think Merna's section could be longer to reveal more of her character. How old is Lia? you might want to describe her appearence, though she seems a unique heroine (if that's what she is). the beginning is a little weak/confusing at first. update!