Reviews for You Are the Dragon, My Love
writewithcourage chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Very nice. I like this. This is the first time I've peered into a damsel's thoughts in a poem of this nature.

I loved:

"You hoard up our memories like gold-

And what I want I'll not get.

I want you to choose me, my love

Out of all the damsels distressed,"

Stunning! Perhaps the dragon will appreciate her love for him someday. :)
W.S.Ravensoul chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
I enjoyed the way that poem flowed. A lot of helpless frustration in there. The damsel has my pity. You have a lovely way with words. Keep this up. TTFN.


Foreverswimming chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
I really liked this. I think the meaning is that we sometimes think that others are always fooling and messing with us when really we are binding ourselves to them. We could escape yet we refuse to. Well, that's how I see it at least.
The Mumbling Sage chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
Interesting choice of comparisons, and one that is very accurate the way you portray it. I like your rhyme and meter as well.
sifer chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
Wow Marina i realy like this one it shows everything in alittle of you're situation you know?,BBF and eternity-Wyatt
lookingwest chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
i really like this plot for a poem, it's really creative, and i also like how great you did ABABAB rhymthing. great ending too. bravo.