|Reviews for Read My Lips Ahuvati|
| the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
This was really good. I like how you embrace your Judaism, it is refreshing from some of my temple friends.
I loved these lines, they were incredible
"So maybe you’ll be my nobody
And I can be your nothing
Since we all end up
No ones with no face."
I loved the idea that you grasp and hold onto what you believe in these lines. It hit me and I don't no why.
the Stranger in the moonlight.
| candyaddict chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
totally drenched with emotion. I loved the sort of given up feel this poem has.
| the Cellar Door chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
I really like this. I've felt like that... I think maybe everyone has, but it's nice that its something a lot of people can relate to, or if they dont, its nice they cant.
And I like the use of the Hebrew. I see translations in other languages all the time but that's something new, I really think that's cool.
| Lady Glass chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
Aw, it was beautiful, very excellent imagery. I like the little bits of Hebrew you added in, it made it much more personal and made the poem in itself more unique. Very good!
| NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
love how you entertwined the hebrew in there, cool, great poem
| burning kisses chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
hey! NICE! "So maybe you’ll be my nobody." I love this line. it makes me feel all bubbly inside *runs for bathroom* jk. love it. so sad i miss them so much. ah ur love. i think i am going to post my rap. lol. MWA
| fairEtales chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
AH! I LOVED it! AMAZING JOB! OMG! I LOVE that song! Anyway, great job. I especially loved, "So maybe you’ll be my nobody/ And I can be your nothing/ Since we all end up/ No ones with no face." AMAZING! Ani Ohevet et zeh harbeh harbeh! Tov Tov, Nachama! Muy Bien!