Reviews for refusal
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
style is just amazing in this, i am sure i have seen similar but the way you execute it is just unrivaled. oh, the use of parenthesis is just amazing; it can be so overdone but you use it well, those perfect lines are made even more perfect with that sense of restrition. oh, the last line was like, wowohmygod BEAUTIFUL.

~* noelle
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
great poem. i really love the last line. good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~