Reviews for UNTITLED but still loved
FlashingBlades chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
I love this! I'm adding it to my favorites! :)
Mathael Ikritiriax chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
Cool! Cool! I realy really liek it! hm I think it could be called "Sword dance" or something to that effect... but that kinda sounds a little cheesy... Can see why it's untitled. Bu it's really awesome.
worldmage chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
what a perfect poem...FOR ME TO PISS ON!
Finding the Moon chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
yes i do!, lol i like the word choice in this one and i can relate to this i like swords.
Michael Aliester Smith chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
Sheerly beautiful. Again, I feel this one. Very visceral and yet intellectual.
Artemis Astralstar chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
I like the journey you take the reader on: Dance, to Swordplay, to a subject, to Poetry.

Effective use of the word "boy" everysooften, and just enough not to ruin it. Constant register, and lovely imagery.

Nice poem! :)
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
Oh my. This was really really well done. Bravo to you. Everything was just perfect, from the gorgeous imagery to the powerful emotion of the mixture that is lust and love. Beautiful.
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
Hey...i really really liked this coz i can relate to this...i dunno wot else to say really, other than it is a great piece of writing.._ revierw me sumtiem_