Reviews for Roaring, Making Way
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
that's a cool format.. I like it and I liek the poem too!
SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
I'm not too sure what to make of this. I understand the formula you used, but have no idea what the actual poem was supposed to be about.

Of course, the day I start to understand poetry is the day I'll officially have to admit I have too much blood in my alcohol stream!

Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Wow, this is a really good piece of work, I really enjoyed reading it, the word play is cool and I really got into it!

Keep writing!