Reviews for paper love in an old hotel room
emsworth chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
fictionpress says:"It is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer."

but what can i say when no part of the poem can be improved upon? this is as good as it gets, to quote mr. james l. brooks
Neverlander12 chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
Oh my...the tone is deliciously shadowed. I love it. It's sad and delicate and wonderful. Peachy.

Herminia chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
I really liked this. The last line, "Room service, ma'am?" was great. I love dialogue in poems. Well done!
elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
Great story told in this. Nice word choice and you get a very nice feel for the characters in this. Good write. :D
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
wow, i like the way you set up the entire tone~ very well done

keep writing!