|Reviews for Paste|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Maybe strange but always interesting! Keep it up, keep it up.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
strange, but i like this. the way you wrote it made it lovely.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
I like the bits and fragments that jump out so vividly in this. You've taken an everyday ritual and blown it into the wind in a wonderful way. Excellent visuals and phrase work. Well done.
| ronshaberry chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
It's so funny how you make brushing teeth an epic journey. Wonderful. Hah.
| notACTUALLYwriting chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
Hm. Kinda funny. I mean, you can't really decide that it's about brushing your teeth until the last line, right?
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
interesting i like the imagery, so familiar, yet, not good job
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
Ineresting...i like..._ r&r me sumtime_
| die kleine maus chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
lol, this was brilliant. and so i won't waste time reviewing it, telling you that the run-on lines were great and your (unintentional?) alliteration since i just did, oh well.