|Reviews for Lullaby for Eternity|
| openmouthblues chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
Wotcha. Quite well done, I must admit. I like it, very much. This would probably be my favorite part:
"In the gentle silence
Shivering pieces of memory
Fall with soft remembrance.
Ever quivering, noiselessly."
I don't know. It speaks volumes in words.
Well done, kudos to you.
Oh, and thanks for the review.
| HgBookworm chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Very nicely written. I do enjoy the lines, "Time, Forever an uncertainty" the most, I believe, because they seem to portray the emotions of this poem and strengthen the flow of the poem. -HgBookworm
| Twilit Exaggerance chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
'fall with soft remembrance'
Pretty image, contrast to the prior line. These are very good, Mizu.
Your titles I adore, mind you.
Do you discover the title, and then the poem, I wonder?
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
I really love that last stanza... awesome poem
| Loup17 chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
oh, i really liked that one, i especially liked the idea of the peices of memories and the last line... wonderful. ur style of writing is so interesting, it's no surprise everyone likes it ..
| theory of black chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Oh wow, this is really awesome and pretty. No, beautiful. )
Thank you for your review, too.
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
This one is one smooth transition after another and reading this outloud it just soothed me, for some reason.
Again word choice is perfect.
| gummibared chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
'A quiet lullaby for eternity'... awesome poem! *adds to faves* 3
| coal and marigolds chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
| nofaceme chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
This is so pretty. It also works well with the other one you wrote recently. I can tell it's yours. _ I especially loved "shivering pieces of memory". Great line. Keep it up!p.s. thanks for the grammatical help. _ I fixed it promptly.
| callmebelle chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
I love the last stanza... for some reason, and i can't say why, it reminds me of The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock, which is only my favorite poem of all time. Amazing work!
| envy me chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
the mood for this is not happy I presume.. this is alright... not a favorite of mine but I think I remember you and something of yours I really liked... i don know though.. maybe imn on crack... I like the end... I dont know about the rest of it though...
| Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
I loved the feeling of this one! It's seemed very...hm...airy! Kind of like that floating, lost feeling.
* * * D.W.G * * *
| I still love music chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
Captures for me one of those moments when evening is just beginning to fall over the countryside. Lovely.
| Mao Chen chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
the opening is breathtaking, and thanks for commenting on some of my stuff!
I've been behind in posting, but not in writing..