|Reviews for End of the Advert|
| CrimsonSoulTears chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
wow that end line is so deep. dunno wat it means but wow!
i also lv these lines
Twice the age of a little two,
For you feel it to you feel their sadness,And what you feel is called utter gladness,(SO deep)
Bright green eyes with specks of yellow,
but y do u keep puttin capitals and commas? thas not rite punctuashon.