Reviews for End of the Advert
CrimsonSoulTears chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
wow that end line is so deep. dunno wat it means but wow!

i also lv these lines

Twice the age of a little two,

For you feel it to you feel their sadness,And what you feel is called utter gladness,(SO deep)

Bright green eyes with specks of yellow,

but y do u keep puttin capitals and commas? thas not rite punctuashon.