Reviews for Hotmilk
hey maria chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
"glue sniffers, the surp drinkers, the water that deadens the froth of an infertile mind."

Your diction is perfect, I love the phrases you create.
Autumn Dance chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Clever and neat. I like it...AD x
Lovetress chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Um, I was confused.
contrast and friction chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
This was so powerful & intense. You addressed it Elliot, making the piece so much more personal - I felt like an intruder reading it.. Beautiful work.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
aww! this is beautiful! i love the way you address Elliot, it makes it seem so much more personal and real. lovely work.