Interesting style. I like the bit about wobbling, and the quote at the beginning. I think I did one of those quotes before... Still not sure why its so darn appealing, though.

i like it. i really want you to continue a quest gone rong but i like reading your short stores well you think you get over your writers block. i hope you do soon but this is good to. i think you should think about continuing it. just a bit. i think it's a perfect introduction to a story. you could go on and make it a whole novel. it could start with him meeting sophia triggs. i don't know. but if you want more ideas you know you can ask me. i really think you should continue this though. it has good potential.