Reviews for February Dying in the Rising Waves
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
beautiful poem... the first stanza is as delicious as a sunday roast... and the rolling inspiration in the world around you is magnificent, and the resolution of the last stanza fits the overall concept.
hoowdoideletethisaccount chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Mhm... I love this. It has a quietness, like warm afternoon sun and smiles, and I can imagine you sitting there amidst it all, writing about it. :) Oh yeah, and I absolutely adore the title.
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
Great imagery. Beautiful piece of art. Keep'em coming.
classic violet chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Excellent & just so vivid. I simply love this.
La Gitane chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
I do like this. There's a very natural, reflective flow to this, it gives the poem a great sense of free thought... your use of free verse is particularly good here. I love the thoughts of the final stanza as well - it strikes a very familiar chord - and not only in myself, I suspect.

A most interesting piece of work...
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
beatiful work. keep on going! i adore your imagery.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
i just love how you word things - it works so well! beautiful flow and very lyrical. great job!
are you from mejico chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
nature. lovely. I wish I could do this. I really liked this. very sensory active
Aquafied chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
amazing how you can twist thoughts into anything

just amazing.
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
cool poem. i love the last stanza. good job :)dropsofjewpiter